I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 27 July 2018
holiday fun
in the holiday i went to the movies twice the first movie was in a private theater in wellington and we watched the increadbles 2 i wuold rate it 4/10 at the most and then two days later we went to watch hotel transylvania 3 and i would rate that movie 8/10 it was pretty good a lot of singing and life or death situations anrsdayd when the movie fineshed i weni back to my friends . Whae i was at the same friends when we went to wellington we also went to lazer force then i went home.
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all of you I have to be capital letters and the two movie names have to be capital letters too.
ReplyDeleteyou need to put in capital letters at the start on the sentent.
ReplyDelete4/10 for Incredibles I thought it would have been better.
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